Showing posts with label grammar. Show all posts
Showing posts with label grammar. Show all posts

Sunday, March 3, 2013

i'm not the center of the universe, after all

So... apparently as a procrastination buffer against reading more under-edited literary analysis essays written by high-schoolers, i'm going to explore this issue:  Perhaps it is time we stopped capitalizing the first person "i."

Half the time, my students don't do it anyway.  Mostly out of the laziness of habit of never having to press the "shift" button in Microsoft Office, because usually it will auto-correct this common error.  At least, that's my theory. Most smart-phones fix it, too, and Google Drive marks the error, though it does not correct it on its own.

But perhaps "i" is a bad habit that should stay.  After all, now that we don't use Roman numerals on a regular basis, there really shouldn't be any confusion between "I" and "i" right?  I suppose there wouldn't be, even if they WERE Roman numerals.

In a sense, perhaps it makes sense to capitalize "I" since it stands in place of our own proper name when we write in first person.  However, "you" also stands in place of our addressee's proper name when we speak in second person.  Why am "I" superior to "you"(if indeed that is what capitalization implies)?  The best reason I can think of is that "I" am me and "you" are not me.  That is, "I" am intimately familiar with myself, and therefore more important to myself than "you" are.  So, why are "me," and "myself" not capitalized if "I" am so much higher priority to myself than "you" are?

Oh, so, you propose that it's because "me" and "myself" are objective cases, and "I" is the subject of a clause, which puts it in an overall more powerful position in the sentence. Therefore "me" has less power, less influence, and a lower place in the grammatical hierarchy than "I."

Okay. So why isn't "You" capitalized when it is the subject of a clause?  Ha!  The convention reveals that "you" inherently are objectified or disenfranchised when "I" am talking.  Stop interrupting!

All i'm arguing is that perhaps in a global society where we are all being forced to recognize how interdependent our lives are, "i" might let go of convention to let "you" and "them" know we all matter (or don't) equally.


Friday, March 23, 2012

Passive Voice

Passive Voice

These intentions of yours are
confounded when they are
inverted into the passive.

Power once wielded
by poet becomes
toy: The sins that are
committed,
the crimes that are
wrought, any repentance,
the concept thought.

The subject is
sought. What subjection
of the reader is
imposed in the name
of what?

A labyrinth of
folded statements is
wound to
the cliff’s sheer edge,
crumbs consumed by
reader who by
her guesses must be
led.

When the codec is
omitted the reader is
left hovering midair
a caricature
grasping back
for the last blind purchase

the subject a blankness
flung from
the sentence’s ledge

 
I am finding this year that writing is like stirring a pot that has settled.  You can't just stir the top half of the pot with that big wooden spoon, but all the contents that have settled at the bottom come whirling around with it.  So I sit this morning to begin working on my National Board portfolio for the day, and what comes up but a poem.  I'm sure it can still use some revision, but it's got potential.  Feedback welcomed. 
 
This happens a lot for me while I am grading papers, and it also happened during NaNoWriMo.  Have a good weekend, everyone, and send good writing/ revising vibes my way.  Good thoughts, prayers, lit candles, encouraging e-mails.  None of it can hurt!